The Evening Mist

 

Once upon a summer’s eve a vision came to be,

A beauty in the evening mist did cast her spell on me.

Head held high and statuesque, her eyes as black as coal,

As though an angel cast from Heaven, she peered into my soul.

 

 

Her beauty was divinely pure, her grace in Ballerina’s style,

Lips that glowed upon her face, as she began to smile.

She glanced my way with batted eyes, and flipped her hair around,

The room was still as deafened night, the crowd made not a sound.

 

 

Slowly she sauntered across the room, giving me her grin.

As she walked, I knew forthwith, that I was reeled in.

She took my hand so effortless, and placed it on her breast,

My body tingled from the rush; your imagination can fuel the rest.

 

 

I never saw her from that night, remembering our tryst,

The girl who shared my dreams that night, together in the Evening mist.

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Comments (38)

  1. cjb321

    This is absolutely great!!! Thank you for sharing this!! big smile

    February 20, 2014
    1. dreamshadow59

      Awwww…Thanks!!!! That means a lot coming from the expert…I appreciate it…

      February 20, 2014
      1. cjb321

        Kind words coming from a friend are always GREATLY appreciated. Thank you, friend! big smile back

        February 20, 2014
  2. dreamshadow59

    It is indeed MY pleasure ….

    February 20, 2014
  3. cameronredmon

    I enjoyed the way you described it. I could picture it all so clearly in my head.

    February 20, 2014
    1. dreamshadow59

      Awwwwww…..Thank you for being so kind…Poetry is something I love but am not very good at writing it….Muah!!!!

      February 20, 2014
      1. cameronredmon

        This is very good.

        February 20, 2014
        1. dreamshadow59

          You are too kind….Thank you!!!

          February 20, 2014
  4. noahbody

    Wow! An excellent write!

    February 20, 2014
    1. dreamshadow59

      Thank you very much!!!

      February 20, 2014
  5. EdwardNorton

    Hiya dreamy!

    February 20, 2014
    1. dreamshadow59

      Hi there Ed…How ya doin’???

      February 20, 2014
      1. EdwardNorton

        Very long story but the short of it is that I am still alive and kicking in spite of being told I would not be a year ago november. Can’t complain although there are many things I am not able to do anymore. How is life treating you my friend?

        February 21, 2014
        1. dreamshadow59

          First off, let me just say that I am Sooooooooo glad that you are still around and kicking…You were always a favorite of mine Ed….I am still the same…Drunk..Oversexed…and ready to go!!!!

          February 21, 2014
          1. EdwardNorton

            Drunk and oversexed? Now what was your address again?!! Haaaa! You’re a pretty special cyber gal to me as well and have been from day 1 on here.

            March 13, 2014
  6. Munkyman

    Ok from the 1st line I was expecting a joke about douches. Pretty poem but, damn it I want a joke about douches.

    February 20, 2014
    1. dreamshadow59

      Hehehehehe…I’ll try and think of one…

      February 20, 2014
      1. Munkyman

        Once upon a Summer’s Eve a beauty came to be
        Less than fresh… a little tuna ee
        Nose held tight I tried to go down but, it over powered me
        Eyes watering I had to flee.

        Then as I dressed in her bath I vision appeared from above…
        the toilet tank, Massengill, Country Fresh, the scent of love.
        I grabbed it tight & suggested a shower before we begin.
        As soon as she accepted I bent her over & put the douche in

        The rest of the night was a carnal delight
        Thanks to my country fresh friend.

        February 20, 2014
        1. dreamshadow59

          Hehehehehehehehe…..OMG!!! LMFAO!!!! Hehehehehehehehehehehehe!!!!!!!!!!!

          February 20, 2014
          1. Munkyman

            Thank you, I figured since I wanted the douche joke I should provide it. I always thought I’d have made a hell of a copywriter.

            February 20, 2014
            1. dreamshadow59

              Indeed!!!

              February 20, 2014
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  7. rebecca2013

    absolutely lovely…..

    February 20, 2014
    1. dreamshadow59

      Thank you Becca….

      February 20, 2014
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      1. rebecca2013

        you are always welcome my sweet chica…. kisses~!

        February 20, 2014
  8. RRoe

    Enjoyed. Going to sleep now hoping that lady comes to me in my dreams.

    February 21, 2014
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  9. dreamshadow59

    I hope so to…

    February 21, 2014
  10. bazmimasud

    I can help to plan next six years atleast for peoples’ of my group & agegroup surely.

    December 29, 2014
  11. dreamshadow59

    Awwwww…You folks are ALL so supportive…..You are gonna make my head too big to get out of the door… Hehehehehe….

    February 20, 2014
    1. dreamshadow59

      Thank you so much!!!

      February 20, 2014
  12. dreamshadow59

    Awwwwwww…..Thank You!!!! :Kiss:

    February 20, 2014
    1. dreamshadow59

      There….I just wiped it off….Hehehe…

      February 20, 2014
      1. dreamshadow59

        Ohhhhhh….You ARE a naughty boy…..I LOVE it!!!

        February 20, 2014
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